• Tomorrow will be our last day working on our essays
• As assessment will be given within the next few days. It will be on the skills we've been focusing on: writing a claim, choosing strong evidence, and writing strong analysis that shows the connection between the evidence and your claim
• Essays are due Wednesday, 12/20. You must include both your outline and draft with your final copy. Covers are optional.

Complete the following revisions of your draft:

• Context: Is the part of the story the quote is from described?
• Repetition: replace words and names used frequently with synonyms or pronouns

Complete the following revision of draft:

• transition words (start of body paragraphs and conclusion; context)
• analysis: make it more complete and make sure it connects the quote back to survival
• word choice: describe extreme conditions with words that are appropriately intense

7-441 & 7-346: Complete draft of all five paragraphs by tomorrow.

7-235 & 7-339: Complete draft of introduction and 3 body paragraphs by tomorrow.

Read independent reading books. We will finish writing our drafts in class tomorrow so you miss class due to concert rehearsals, that needs to be done by Thursday.

Complete context for evidence on essay outline, preferably using the following sentence starters:

• Early in his journey,...
• While traveling through lion country,...
• After Salva was forced out of his village,...
• After crossing the Nile,...
• At one point in his journey,...
• By the time he reached...
• After _________, Salva had to...
• Later in the story,
• A few years later,...
• Much later, Salva found himself...
• Many years into his journey...

Complete evidence collection (quotes) for all body paragraphs.